little play, but little turnaround

I haven't been playing much in the last month. I'm still having trouble beating inferior players. They are getting lucky. I've been listening to the Pocket 5s podcast. There are amazing numbers of people having consistent multi-table successes. It makes me want to rededicate myself AGAIN. I also heard about a concept where Annette_15 won a 180 player S&G without looking at her cards. Daniel Negraneau said that was good practice - presumably for reading and pouncing on weakness.

Here's a play I made today that I'm proud of:

http://www.pokerhand.org/?1904725

This donkey made a bad raise leaving himself vulnerable, and I took advantage and came over the top of him. Moron calls me with 5 high. Obviously, I was not raising for value, but for taking advantage of the situation.

I'd really like to scrutinize my play more and evaluate the bad plays I am making and eliminate them. I think I have this style that has evolved some, but I'm not advancing much.